the writers work is below average for university level work. its incohesive  and very repetitive. its the type of work that you had in just to hand in rather than to get a good grade. a bit worried honestly because I already know im going to fail this section of my assignment. the writer is nice and was willing to change stuff that I didn't like but again, it seemed like the main thing he/she wanted to do is complete the word count instead of structuring the essay nicely with theory backing up statements ):

Almost good