Many Issues with the paper, the only decent thing was that the writter tried to fix it, which made it acceptable. but not great. there are still many gramatical errors and phases that dont really match up. seems like the writter is not fluent and familiar with english writting. i will have to add my own edits before i turn this in as i dont have anymore time to wait for the writter to fix the mistakes. I was expecting a high quality paper by the deadline and i have received them in the past but this is not one even after a 5 hour extension this paper is not the quality i would have expected.