Not 100% following the format I wanted. As the writer does not make use of any given data so it seems not very related to another parts of the report I have written. However, given such short time, I think the writer did a good job. I was also impressed how the writer replied very fast and showed the dedication of wanting to get the job done. I'd have given the writer 8* but I give 9* instead since the writer has written more words than I expected. The only reason why I did not give 10* is because I still have to go back and edit the work quite a lot.